Проверьте, , правильность написания текста) hello! today i would like to tell you about two famous people which are in the news at the moment. they are dorofeeva and monatik. news are talking about them now because they have recently made a new video clip for the song "deep". so they catches many eyes because they have not sung together before. besides, the clip was made in paris. it is very bright and beautiful. also, celebrities amazed their fans with their wonderful dance. the song with dance rhythms becames popular very quickly.

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Hello! Today I would like to tell you about two famous people who are in the news at the moment. They are Dorofeeva and Monatik. Reporters are talking about them now, because they have recently made a new video clip for the song "Deep". Many people are following in love with their music as they have not sung together before. Besides, the clip was made in Paris. It is very bright and beautiful. Additionally, the celebrities amazed their fans with their wonderful choreography. The song become vast popular, because of its music, lyrics and dance.