1.Frankly speaking , my favourite sport is volleyball.
2.Moreover, I have been playing it since this autumn.
3.In addition, I play volleyball thrice a week : on Monday , on Tuesday and on Friday.
4.I must say , playing volleyball makes me faster ,more attentive and organise(organized ,можно и так и так) .
5.What is more , it makes me healtier and more cheerful
6.As good as , while playing it I always think and plan where and how to trow the ball in order to win .
7.In my point of view , volleyball is cool and I advise you to play it!
Объяснение:
Некоторые факты можно менять . Например : 3. В дополнение , я играю в волейбол трижды в неделю : в понедельник , во вторник и в пятницу , здесь можно поменять дни или сказать не трижды в неделю , а дважды. Также , можно убрать вставные выражения
