Исправьте чтобы было приемлемо сдать учителю «my family is the centre of my life. in ours there's just parents my elder brother and i. we all live under one roof. my brother and i don't always get on, but he all my life care for me. my parents make us feel special. they usually support me.»

My family is the centre of my life. There are just parents, my older brother and me in my family. We live under the same roof. My brother and I don't always get along well, but he has been caring for me for my whole life. My parents make us feel special. They usually support me.

Вроде в первом предложении не is a are
во втором предложении не правильная структура,нужно подлежащее потом сказуемое потом все остальное