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I like going to the theater in the evenings. There are few theaters in my city, but they are popular. One day, my grandmother offered to go to the theater. I agreed with pleasure and we bought a ticket for a comedy for the evening session. At 6 o'clock in the evening we went to the theater. When we arrived, the hall was full of people. We took the place on the 12th row. From there the scene was clearly visible. The light went out and the show began. The view is exciting. There was good music and jokes. We laughed loudly. At the end of the performance, all the audience applauded loudly. We loved my grandmother very much. We remembered the performance for a long time and laughed.

Choosing a favorite season would be difficult because they are all special to me. They each have something to offer and are unique in every way.
             Winter is one of my favorites because it is so beautiful to see everything covered with a white sheet of snow. It also cools you down from all the heat left from the summer and into the fall. You have fun with your family making snow angels and have snowball fights. 
             Spring is a good season because it is between winter and summer, temperatures are not too cold and not to hot. You are comfortable wearing a light jacket outside instead of a heavy warm coat. You can walk and smell the flowers beginning to flourish. The birds start chirping early in the morning. It lets you know that summer is near and so is summer vacation. 
             Summer is great because it's time to hang up your shoes and relax. There is no more school and you can go to sleep late and wake up late. Relatives visit or you can visit them. You can also do some traveling and explore new places. Relaxing in the pool on a floating lounge chair enjoying cold lemonade is the ultimate experience.
             Autumn is also a great season because of all the colorful leaves falling even though they are a hassle to pick up, especially in the pools. You can have fun walking with friends and admiring the different shades of colors on the leaves. The different colors warm your soul. 
             Autumn is such a calm season. The leaves turn beautiful tones of yellow, orange, and red. Everyone is starting over with a new class, a new teacher, and some new friends. When you drive by the neighborhoods you notice that families are all gathered in some kind of celebration. You get such a warm feeling. It's such a peaceful time.
             Now you know why I cannot choose one of the seasons. All of them are special in every way. I love them all. I'm just glad I get to enjoy every single one.