Решите умаляю. нужно. буду бдагодарен

I take the liberty of applying for the period of study in educational institutions in the framework of the International Association for the exchange of students for gaining experience.
My name is Maxim.At the moment I'm in the tenth year of training, the whole training course lasts for eleven years.
Besides my native language is Russian. I know how to speak and write in English.
I found your University in the list of best schools in the UK in the exchange scheme. I was acquainted with the activity of your work for a long time and always wondered for the fine work that you did. The opportunity to get an interesting experience in your school means a lot to me.
I would be very grateful if I could be considered a candidate for membership in your school.
Regarding the duration of the training period, I understand that this period should not exceed several weeks.
I hope to hear from you approval

- Hi!
- Hello!
- I want ask you about your favorite book.
- My favorite book? Ok. It named "Romeo and Juliet". In my opinion it is the best book of William Shakespeare. And what about you?
- My favorite book - Cinderella. It is very good story about kind girl, that have dream.
- Oh, I know this book. It is good.
- Goodbye
- Bye

- Привет!
- Привет!
- Я хотел бы спросить у тебя о твоей любимой книге.
- Моей любимой книге? Ладно. Она называется "Ромео и Джульетта".
Я считаю, что это лучшая книга Вильяма Шекспира. А у тебя какая?
- Моя любимая книга - Золушка. Это история о доброй девочке с мечтой.
- О, я знаю эту книгу. Она хороша.
- Пока. 
- Пока

Знаю, концовка не очень, но мне в голову ничего не идет. Надеюсь тебе