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                                     Charlie and the Chocolate Factory

I have just seen a musical film “Charlie and the Chocolate Factory” which is based on a children’s novel by Roald Dahl. The film was directed by Tim Burton.

This fantasy comedy film is about an eccentric chocolate magnate Willy Wonka and Charlie Bucket, a good-natured boy from a poor family. One day Willie announces an international competition to select the heir to his candy empire. Charlie and four more children find "golden tickets" in Wonka chocolate bars and win a tour of the legendary chocolate factory that has been hidden from people’s eyes for fifteen years. Watching the film is like being on that tour with Charlie.  The four naughty kids get punished during the film, and in the end Charlie helps Willy Wonka to find his father.

The film stars are my favourite actors Johnny Depp and Freddie Highmore. Their acting is just superb. I also like the music in the film. There are a few songs in the film sung by the funny little Oompa-Loompas. The visual effects are simply the best, all the chocolate things look very realistic!  I was surprised to know that all the Oompa-Loompas were played by one actor.

I enjoyed every minute of this story on the screen.