Write yes or no to answer each question. 1 Did Aruzhan write to Vera yesterday?
2 Do we know where Aruzhan is right now?
3 Is Aruzhan's party on Monday?
4 Do we know why Aruzhan is having a party?

5 Did Vera's mother give her permission to go to
the party?
6 Did Vera cry when she was talking to her
mother?
7 Does Vera's mum think she is too young to do
some things?
8 Does Aruzhan know Vera's mum?
9 Do we know what Aruzhan's relationship with
her parents is?
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School of my dreаm .School of my dream
In my dream school, all the great classes, so you can during peremenok run on them without any difficulty! The school is bound to be a huge sports hall, where everyone can find something for your taste. Tennis, volleyball, jump rope, soccer, skiing, skateboarding.
My father was in the school pool at this school is too Swimming Pool
Each student will be able to independently choose their favorite lessons to go to items that will be useful to him in adulthood.
Each student his lessons.

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1. Имя ставится перед фамилией - Katya October

2. Возможно, вместо habitation стоит поставить accommodation как жилье

3. I am writing to find out more information about your advertisment. Students and I have some questions to ask you. - в этом абзаце я бы написала так вместо 2 предложения

4. Firstly, secondly, finally лично я бы не использовала, это же не эссе с аргументами

+ сюда же, повторение finally в одном абзаце

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5. "written about" стоит заменить на "you mention".

6. "What include this words?" - очень непонятная формулировка, даже не знаю как перевести это предложение. Я бы написала так:

Could you tell me what facilities are available in furnished and self-contained rooms? I also would like to know if bed linen, towels, hair dryers and teapots are included. (это вместо 2 и 3 предложения)

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7. Would you mind telling me how many beds are there in each room? - сколько мест в каждом номере? It would be nice if there are rooms for three person on the same floor.

8. Не знаю, считать ли это ошибкой, но есть повторение того факта, что вы остаетесь на 3 недели. Думаю, стоит объединить информацию в одно предложение и оставить в начале

9. Could you say, what does it cost to stay in your (hotel, если вы пишете об отеле) for three weeks? Also I'd like to know if there are any discounts (for students). - нельзя в формальном письме писать прямые вопросы, а выпрашивать скидку просто невежливо, лучше ненавязчиво узнать о возможности скидки :з

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10. I'd be grateful if you tell me about additional facilities such as shops, swimming pools or cafes. Could you please inform me(...)?

11. Would you mind also telling me, how can I book(...)?

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12. В конце просто пишут "I look forward to hearing from you", без каких-либо благодарностей

По сути, я просто изменила твои вопросы - это главная ошибка. Всегда надо вежливые формы ставить по типу "could you please...", "would you mind..." с: