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   When I was five years old I decided to fly to space and I tried to live there for a some time. I got it and I was really enjoyed about it.   I remember how I looked at our Earth from our spaceship. This is really beutiful landscape! After a short time I asked our captain to land on any planet. He chose the Moon because this planet was close to us. When we were trying to land on it I saw a strange spaceship in front of us, I thought that it was UFO, and I was right! But the problems was that except me nobody had seen it. Since then I haven't said this story to anyone.

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Hello Skott. I want to tell you about yesterday. 
In school teacher give to us exrecises: draw your home. We draw 
a picture with my friend Kate. Teacher say that our picture very beautiful.
We were very happy.
 Write me how was your day.
Best wishes (ваше имя) 
Привет, Скотт. Я хочу рассказать как мой день,
В школе учитель дал нам задание: нарисовать свой дом. Мы нарисовали рисунок с моим другом Кейт. Учитель сказал, что наш рисунок очень красивый. Мы были очень рады.
Пиши как твой день. 
С лучшими пожеланиями (ваше имя)