Write an entry for the 'You haven't lived until ...' competition. Use infrormation about a place you like and know well.
Use of adjectives and intensifiers.
You have organized your ideas in a logical way.

"You haven't lived until you you've been to Paris."

Paris ... The most romantic city in the world ... Every corner, courtyard, park or square in it is saturated with an atmosphere of love. He always seemed to me so advanced, beautiful, just paradise for me. Paris is famous for the Eiffel Tower and croissants. But I want not only to see these sights, but also to walk along the beautiful and quiet streets of Paris. I think everyone should see this beautiful city.