Определите время у предложений

1)This history tells us about girls who have gone to travel to London by train. 2)After a while Sara and Rachelle have arrived in Notting Hill. 3)The Girls took a look around and have understood that they have reached Notting Hill 4)Thousands of people lined the streets to look at parade. 5)The Procession began and girlfriends have seen people in colourful dresses which danced under music 6) But the storm has suddenly begun 7) Sora got separated from Rachel 8) But suddenly Sarah saw Rachel's umbrella 9) the Girls were reunited and had coffee together

Было 2 или 3 ошибки

1) It was pleasantly to go for a walk in such hot day.
2) To be honest, I read this book in translation.
3) He knows englis well enough, to translate this article.
4) First, that need to do, - is to type new words from text.
5) It is useless to conflict with you; you are very stubborn.
6) It is never late to recognize your mistake.
7) She went to Far East and haven't comebacked in her's hometown.
8) To put it mildly, he didn't tell all truth to you.
9) I feel myself very bad, to go with you out of town.
10) In short, their fault still hasn't proved .