The ideas in your essay nead to be organised better.

6. Della was hurrying from shop to shop looking for a present for Jim. 7. The other day my sister and I (went shopping together. We entered a big shop in Arbat street. While my sister was choosing a new hat, I looked for a pair of gloves. 8. The moment he heard the news, Jim called me by telephone. 9. Just as I was leaving for home, a student (to stopped me in the hall. 10. When I last saw her she was hurrying along the road to the station. I asked her where she was going and she said to London, but I don’t think she told the truth because there was not  any train to London at that time.

I received your letter. Thank you wrote me. We have this new Sherlock Holmes film , did not appear until the show only the trailer, but say that the film will be released in the coming month . I really want to see it . I love movies where mix different genres . Basically, I like movies where there is a comedy, adventure and thriller at the same time . If I were a writer , I would write movies such geners . I like to visit cinemas , because I love to watch movies on the big screen with a good sound . I am very interested , "What kind of movies do you like genres . What would you do a movie? ".  And I want to know , " What new and ineresting films will be released in the coming year in your country?" 
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