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A person I admire
My brother is the person that I admire. He is kind and smart, and always helps everyone, especially me. He explains difficult tasks and gives life lessons. “Always go all the way and never give up” is his favorite quote. He used to play sports when he was a child. He has started to play football with great enthusiasm. In a year, he has been promoted to the major player. Sometimes he played better than others, despite the fact that they are 3 years older than him. When he turned 14, he was called to the second squad of the zhetisu team. There is no precedent for a calling a simple guy from a village to the second squad. As it turned out, they just wanted to get the best player in our city in the main squad as soon as he turned 16. But he rejected their suggestion because he had a great enthusiasm for science. He is now studying scientific chemistry and is one of the strongest students in his environment. Since childhood, he has been an idol for me, but I cannot be like him, because I haven't talents which he has. Even so, I try to develop in a different areas to become as great as him. So far I cannot catch up with him because I am lazy.
Не во всех уверенна, но всё же
1. I'm going to the Supermarket AS I need to buy some groceries
2. I prepared dinner AFTER I got home.
3. She decided to trust Mike BECAUSE he was a reliable guy.
4. WHEN went to school, she decided to investigate the issue.
5. Lisa decided to break up with Tom AS he was too worried about his career.
6. John bought a new car BEFORE he had received one as a gift last week.
7. Derek days that there will be a problem IF he doesn't bring the car back.
8. Sara will have finished the homework WHILE the time you get here.
9. WHENEVER it's raining, she's going for a walk.
10. EVEN IF she passes her final exam, she will fail the class.