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I love everything alive - cute cats, dogs loyal, noble lion, sly foxes, squirrels charming, colorful fish, birds chirping, and many, many others. But most of all I love dolphins. These amazing mammals always cause tenderness and a smile on my face.

I visited with my parents often dolphins at sea, to look at these most intelligent beings with good and intelligent eyes, to look directly into the soul. And every trip to the dolphinarium was for me - like a real holiday. On this day, I always get up early in the morning and wanted only one thing, to quickly come campaign time.

Coming to the Dolphinarium, I immediately plunged into a real euphoria of universal excitement. After all, we can not wait to hurry to get to his place on the podium and watch the view. And the audience took their seats, and, finally, under the solemn music in the arena dolphinarium leave people in bathing suits - the coaches and trainers of dolphins. Their output of all the spectators greeted with thunderous applause.

And the very idea begins in just a few seconds, where dolphins, sea lions and fur seals perform all kinds of tricks on command of their trainers

My favorite place isn't town. It is a small island on the Volga river. I go there with my family in summer. 
There are many Islands on the Volga river. Why is this Island my favorite place? Well, I like it because there are no people. It is very quiet and green. There are some sea-gulls there. What do we do there? We have picnics, play badminton, swim a lot. We go by boat early in the morning, and come late in the evening. We enjoy our picnic very much.

Мое любимое место это не город. Это небольшой остров на реке Волга. Я езжу туда с моей семьей летом.

На реке Волга есть много островов. Почему этот остров мое любимое место? Ну, мне нравится потому что здесь нет людей. Тут очень тихо и зелено. Здесь есть несколько чаек. Что мы делаем там? Мы устраиваем пикники, игрем в бадминтон, много плаваем. Мы едем на лодке рано утром и приезжаем поздно вечером. Мы очень наслаждаемся нашим пикником.